Original Magnetic Poetry Kit
Ｔｈｅ ｖｏｃａｂｕｌａｒｙ ｇａｍｅ Ｉ ｗａｓ ｃｈｏｓｅｎｆｉｒｓｔ ｐａｇｅ ｗｈｅｎ Ｉ ｏｐｅｎｅｄ Ｍａｇｒｉｅｔｉｃ
Ｐｏｅｔｒｙ．Ｍｙ ｓｔｏｒｙ ｉｓ：＂ Ｈｅ ｐｌａｙｓ ｆｉｄｄｌｅ ｏｎ
ｓｔｏｒｍ ｓｏｍｅ ｅｇｇｓ ＆ ｐｅａｃｈｓ ａｒｅ ｗｏｒｓｈｉｐ
ｈｉｍ ａｓ ｃｈｏｃｏｌａｔｅ ｂｅ ｍｅａｔｓ ａｂｏｕｔ ｍｕｓｉｃ
ａｓ ｒｕｎ．＂
Ｔｈｅ ｓｔｏｒｙ ｄｅｔａｉｌ ｉｓ：＂Ｏｎｅ ｂｏｙ， ｈｉｓ
ｎａｍｅ ｉｓ Ｔｙｌｅｒ， ｈｅ ｒｅａｌｌｙ ｌｉｋｅ ｐｌａｙ
ｆｉｄｄｌｅ； Ｈｏｗｅｖｅｒ ｏｎｅ ｄａｙ， ｗｈｅｎ ｈｅ ｐｌａｙ
ｆｉｄｄｌｅ， ｓｔｏｒｍ ｉｓ ｃｏｍｉｎｇ．Ｈｅ ｊｕｓｔ ｋｅｅｐ
ｄｏ ｉｔ； ｓｏ ｓｏｍｅ ｐａｓｓｅｒｂｙ ｅｇｇｓ ａｎｄ ｐｅａｃｈ
ｌｏｏｋ ｈｉｍ， ｔｈｅｙ ａｒｅ ｒｅａｌｌｙ ｗｏｒｓｈｉｐ ｗｉｔｈ
Ｔｙｌｅｒ． Ｂｅｃａｕｓｅ ｔｈｅ ｓｔｏｒｍ ｉｓ ｓｏ ｂｉｇ， ｈｅ
ｉｓｎ＇ｔ ｆｅａｒ． Ｂｕｔ ｈｉｓ ｍｕｓｉｃ ｉｓ ｎｏｔ ｇｏｏｄ
ｆｏｒ ｌｉｓｔｅｎ， ｔｈｅｒｅｆｏｒｅ ｃｈｏｃｏｌａｔｅ ｆｅｅｌｉｎｇ
ｄｉｓａｐｐｏｉｎｔｅｄ ａｎｄ ｒｕｎ ａｗａｙ．＂
.jpg)
Shernyne, Jiaqin, Kim, Janice:Much content with broken sentences, good colour black and yellow, good effort but needs to organise the paragraphs better. Spelt magnetic wrongly in this passage. Nonetheless, very hardworking. Keep it up.
回复删除Unable to detect your face in your profile picture, you might want to change to something else. The wordings is too bright, we find it hard to focus. And you blog is in Mandarin, "条评论"????? wowowow. All in all, good effort!
回复删除Xiao Wei, Shawn, Wang Xun, Jia Hui